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Old Oct 17, 2007, 06:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The Smell

The smell of them.

The gaseous, gut wrenching stench.

Nothing compares to that of the stink.
The stink of souls.
Souls that feed from your misery.

To see it makes my spirit burn.
They give eachother titles they never earned.
Just to spit, right in my eye.
Hungry, so they watch me die.

Or is it that they want me to stink.
Just like them... A vulture.
But I will never sink.

Sink so low as to share their stink.

They do not know that Im still crying.
Because I wanted to believe the lying.
Convincing me to set pain aside.
But I'll let them think I've already died.

I've already rotted.
At least thats what they should think.
I've already given up my soul.

To ones I know, could never stink.
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Old Oct 17, 2007, 07:02 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: The Smell

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I've already rotted.
At least thats what they should think.
I've already given up my soul.

To ones I know, could never stink.
Stink = corruption.

Very nice imagery. The poem goes from a tone of loathing to identification . . . YOU DON'T STINK, PEACH! I want more peachy poems!
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Old Oct 18, 2007, 08:23 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: The Smell

Extremely well written and well felt. Your writing has developed so much since you started posting here. Congradulations.
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Old Oct 18, 2007, 09:21 AM   #4 (permalink)
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agreed with divine and bratling...

I like the imagery very well.. ^^

hey~! i called her peachy first~!!

Keep up the good work! ^^ be watching ya like a shadow.. xD jk ^^
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