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    a smile like the rain

    another bad day today
    the skies are gray.
    the flowers are dying.

    finally it starts to rain
    everyone runs to shelters
    but i love the feeling of the rain

    i feel freshed and everything
    seems pure.
    then a man walks up to me and stands right next me.
    after a while he turns and smiles at me.

    his smile pure and simple.
    a smile like the rain.....

    well........ plz reply
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    Re: a smile like the rain

    as... Shouldn't it be "as simple as the rain" or just simply "simple like the rain"? Ok.. whatever.. it doesn't really change anything... I like this poem, because I like rain too... and I enjoy standing in it while others shelter...
    The story your telling in this poem is so beautiful too... I really enjoyed reading this poem!!!

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    Re: a smile like the rain

    aww that was cute i liked it =D im not verry good at poems but your are nice
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    Re: a smile like the rain

    well another great peice of work it reminds me when i first met my ex girlfriend

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    Re: a smile like the rain

    thank u for all the wonderful comments..... i love the replys it makes me happy to see people like my poems
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    Re: a smile like the rain

    Awwww....How cute!!! It's all so romantic as well so cute and cool!!!! I hope to see more!!!!
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