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    Smile .::Smile like you mean it::.

    I no longer look for you, no longer pray.

    I have lost touch, even thou. I said I would stay.

    You have done me wrong, and in this way.

    I have nothing to say to you. So please go away.

    You have hurt me, more than you know.

    As far as i am consern. You have turned your back on me once again.

    I will not let it go, I will not let it slide.

    This is my goodbye.

    All the love I have for you. I will throw away.

    I will take this part of me away, and never let it stay!

    This never happen. This was never seen.

    It is all over, and now I promise. I will let you be!

    So let the past go, and lets step ahead.

    This is all in the past.

    So goodbye for today.
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    Jacob Black, Breaking Dawn, Chapter 14, p.271
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    Re: .::Smile like you mean it::.

    . . . dont tell me you're gonna leave AO as well!!!

    nice and bitter your pem is >.<
    omg! everyone is so emo lately! K-san! is there anything i can do to help? >.<
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    Re: .::Smile like you mean it::.

    lol everyone turning emo....nah jus tht K has lot of stuff bottled inside her.........i havent written a poem in awhile...oh well.....anyways K execpt for one spelling mistake but it's good

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: .::Smile like you mean it::.

    Your poem is so full of pain, so sad... yet the ending almost sounds hopeful with "goodbye for today", like the goodbye is not permenant? And the title too... Wonderful poem! Hope things get better! >_<
    Wo shi zhen zhen zhen xi huan ni...

    Thank you Equinn!! ^-^

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    Re: .::Smile like you mean it::.

    Good peom K It's a little sad and deep,I like it Awesome job.
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    Re: .::Smile like you mean it::.

    I like sorrow. Some of the most beautiful things come from hurt. Great job!

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    Don't leave, and it is a nice poem, but a sad one again It did make me sad, good job ...

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    Re: .::Smile like you mean it::.

    Hmmm... Nice poem, but... Why everyone's leaving..?

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