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    Re: .::Smile like you mean it::.

    wow K.... that's brilliant. simply put.

    i love everything... it's great!! such feelings, many could relate to it... >.< but i hope you're not leaving!!! @.@ maybe that goodbye is just for the sorrow feeling...? iunno... but i sure do hope so!! good luck Kat in everything... i know things will get better.... ^-^;

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    i like this poem!!!!
    i love the pain,it relates to everyday life.
    im emo,but i dont know why every1 else is being like that lately.

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    Mr.K what's gotten into you, lol, it was a nice poem, keep it up!

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    Re: .::Smile like you mean it::.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr. K
    I no longer look for you, no longer pray.

    I have lost touch, even thou. I said I would stay.

    You have done me wrong, and in this way.

    I have nothing to say to you. So please go away.

    You have hurt me, more than you know.

    As far as i am consern. You have turned your back on me once again.

    I will not let it go, I will not let it slide.

    This is my goodbye.

    All the love I have for you. I will throw away.

    I will take this part of me away, and never let it stay!

    This never happen. This was never seen.

    It is all over, and now I promise. I will let you be!

    So let the past go, and lets step ahead.

    This is all in the past.

    So goodbye for today.
    Wow Mr. K, great job Im glad you came back to AO your one hell of a poet in my book.


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    Re: .::Smile like you mean it::.

    I like the titile, it dosn't seem like it fits the poem, but if you think about it, it really does ^^

    Very good work K!! I see some drama in there! woo!

    You have done me wrong, and in this way.

    I have nothing to say to you. So please go away.
    I like this part, it really makes your goodbye more forceful.

    Again, wicked poem!

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: .::Smile like you mean it::.

    Really nice poem. Really emo, nice words. Its something I want to say to this girl....
    Okay... so maybe I am a bi too lazy to upload my sig....

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    damn... Kiba's pretty good. with teh dog and steriods, anyway...

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