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    Unhappy Smile For Me...

    So much beauty
    Underneath this.
    I blew the dust away.
    And now I'm taken back by what I see.

    All the strength
    It took to find...
    The diamond in the rough.
    Now everyone else just smiles for me.

    How can I smile?
    When, afterall...
    To him, this diamond is just a clump of dirt.

    They say Im blessed.
    That I should smile.
    But instead I can't escape from all this hurt.

    What is happiness,
    When you're alone?
    Why should I lay my head against an empty pillow?

    If you're a lonely soul,
    Can you have a home?
    Other than sitting underneath a weaping willlow?

    I can't get over it.
    Just accepting it.
    My bed of roses.
    Which to him is nothing more than a steaming pile.

    I should be happy,
    So they say.
    But I'm trapped here.
    If he won't take me, I see no reason to smile.

    How can I smile?
    When, afterall...
    To him, this diamond is just a clump of dirt.

    They say Im blessed.
    That I should smile.
    But instead I can't escape from all this hurt.

    So much beauty
    Underneath this.
    I blew the dust away.
    And now I'm taken back by what I see.

    All the strength
    It took to find...
    The diamond in the rough.
    Now everyone else just smiles for me.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Smile For Me...

    Very good poem I liked the part where you said "How can I smile when afterall to him this diamond is just a clump of dirt". That part reminded me of myself and how this one guy I was with used to treat me. I look forward to your next one.
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    Peach_Follows you really have a way with words and I really like this poem! The feeling and emotions put into this poem makes it great! Keep up the good work and I will be looking for more of your work in the near future!

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    Re: Smile For Me...

    Ilike what you writting
    ^pome^

    the world is big

    but we are set alone sametime

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    Re: Smile For Me...

    Quote Originally Posted by CherryBlossom18 View Post
    Very good poem I liked the part where you said "How can I smile when afterall to him this diamond is just a clump of dirt". That part reminded me of myself and how this one guy I was with used to treat me. I look forward to your next one.
    Yeah. I guess Im learning sometimes you just have to know you're a diamond... even if the person you wish would see you as such, thinks you're worthless.
    In the end, all you can ever be is what you believe you are... Believe you're a diamond and you'll shine... Even in the faces of those who once thought less of you.

    Quote Originally Posted by BlueFox1 View Post
    Peach_Follows you really have a way with words and I really like this poem! The feeling and emotions put into this poem makes it great! Keep up the good work and I will be looking for more of your work in the near future!
    Words are just a way to express something. As humans we have such a pallet of emotions, so colorful. Words are just the brush we use to paint them with. Whats really cool is when someone else can hear\see your words, and feel all the colors with which you paint your heart out with. Making a connection with a person like you is what I find truely valuable.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Smile For Me...

    hmm.. nice poem..though it is long but i enjoy reading it ^^
    good work

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