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    Smokey Eyes

    She looked at herself in confusion
    she spun around telling herself, "it's only an illusion"
    it seemed so much has changed
    but on the outside her smile still remained,
    the bright look on her face
    would never reveal the hidden taste,
    the taste of smokey eyes
    the thought of unforgotten lies.

    she remembered every word she had said
    knowing where it would have led,
    even with knowing how it would end up
    without thinking, she dropped the cup,
    as it smashed to the ground
    everyone turned around,
    the face they once knew
    was now sad and untrue.

    the loved smile had died
    they look at her then discussed how she lied,
    the unforgettable times of wanting to be alive
    had drifted away to the cold dark skies,
    she looked at the one set of eyes that couldn't believe
    then she noticed he got up to leave,
    as he walked away a tear ran down his cheek
    then she felt her dark mascara leak.

    he stopped at the door and looked into her eyes
    she could see all of him was dying inside,
    she had thought he was on her side
    little did she know he didn't think it was real,
    he thought maybe, she'd forget how she feels
    she carried the feeling of depression,
    and he thought that from what she did to stop it, she would have learned a lesson.

    but instead she let the feeling take over
    and all it did was make her lonlier...

    (hope u like it please comment.. thanks)

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    The girl in the pic sure looks lonely...
    Quite a sad poem...to a girl...that is just kidding.. ^^

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    Smokey eyes huh? Well when I proposed that I find an image to match your poems when I leave a comment... I didn't realize how much of a challenge it would be... But, I found something for this one I think. Tell me what you think.
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    @peach:I love the picture very much^_^
    @RayMe:so yuo like the girl in the picture huh?

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