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    Snowy Rain's Goodbye

    Here's a new song that I just wrote.I'm kinda glad that I got something else new in such a short time since my last song lol I hope that everyone likes it Please comment and read.Thank you *bows*


    Title-Snowy Rain's Goodbye


    It hurts,it's painful
    It's sad but it's true
    My feelings for you run so deep
    I'm almost fully to my peak...

    "Sad and lonely"

    All alone in the Rain,in blissful Pain
    Thinking how beautiful the sky is,when it pours
    Wraped in a blanked of snow,All alone on the shore
    Thinking of you brings forth Pain,As it Rains...

    "Snowy Rain,Sweap me away"

    The waves clash back and forth,in Rage
    Just like the War that is happeneing all inside of me
    My heart screams for you,But my mind says No
    Your as cold as Rain and Snow,I don't want to be alone...

    "Snowy battlefield,Bloody Rain"

    Your all I think about,My head throbs in Pain
    I sit at the shore and watch the waves,Go back and forth
    Thinking of all of the hate and sadness you have givin me
    I watch the sea as the skys cry and the Snow begins to fall...

    "Snowy shores,Rainy waves"

    Sitting on the Snowy shore,as the Rain pours more
    I can even feel you more,Even though your so cold
    A tune of Rainy waves,I don't know how to play
    I just wish that all of this Pain,Would be sweapted away...

    "Rainy skys,Snow filled shores"

    Rain and Snow fall from above,I can no longer feel the cold
    As I walk along the shore,I can't see you no more
    I can't hear you,I can no longer feel your icey touch
    Your finally gone,Don't know how or why...I guess this was Goodbye...

    "My Ice covered Heart,Just may melt someday"

    It hurts,it's painful
    It's sad but it's true
    My feelings for you run so deep
    I'm almost fully to my peak...

    "Sad and true.Hurt and pain.Snow and Rain everday.It's finally all gone away.Your face and eyes I see no more.Your voice is gone forever more.I am finally free to walk in the Rainy day and across the Snow covered shores.I bid the fairwell,For I must disappear as well."...
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    Re: Snowy Rain's Goodbye

    Omg!!! That is awesome Shinigami's Angel! Wow in such a short time you dropped another great song on me! Way to go! Man now you make me want to write a song! I don't know what I'll write about but I'll figure something out! Keep it Angel!!! You Rock!!!!

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    Re: Snowy Rain's Goodbye

    i like how you did this one it really expresses how you feel right now you know
    and life is jjust so full if rainysnowy days that the warmth of a loving heart will
    never melt it away fast enough for you. it see,s like it take for ever yea but it melt's eventually and you begine to feel again and the numbess goes away .
    very awesome poem sis and i loved it alot i am glad you posted this i enjoyed it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Snowy Rain's Goodbye

    @ BlueFox1-Thank you soooooo very much for the awesome comment Fox *hugs* I'm glad that you liked it so much lol And it was in a short time huh lol Guess I was just inspired today lol And i'm sure that whatever you write,it will be great And thank you again lol


    @ HolderOfTheDarkChalice-Thank you soooooooooo much big bro *hugs* I'm sooo happy that you enjoyed it And those are the emotion that I was feeling while I was writting this song.
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    Re: Snowy Rain's Goodbye

    that is a Wonderful song Shinigami!!! the descriptions made images on my mind. and the flow of the song is good, it made me read from the start till the end!!! i just realized that life seems to be so cold if no one is around ... it is tough to deal with life alone...

    <is getting teary-eyed

    all in all great job! keep it up. ^^

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Wow,thank you soooooooo very much Raja for the wonderful comment It makes me very happy 2 know that you liked my song And i'm also glad that while you were reading it you could see it,that's just what I wanted.I wanted people 2 be able 2 see what was happening while reading. But thank you so much Raja *hugs*
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    0_0.......................youre writting is getting so good.....................cant wait to see the next one...............the imagery was really good............

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    Re: Snowy Rain's Goodbye

    Thank you so very much Bro *hugs* I'm glad that you think that my writting is getting better. And i'm hopeing that my next song may even be better than this 1 lol
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