hm... nice one!!
i'm looking foward your new poet. (^^)
Thought i never see myself cry
This young man wants to die
Girl you broke my heart so bad
And your worried I'll be mad
I try so hard to forget you
but your stuck in my head like glue
I guess it was black Boy puppy Love
I could see you cause all the fuzz
I couldn't love another like you
Man baby girl you got me feelin o so damn blue
it was good keep up the good work.
It had a different feel to what I'm use to seeing here in the forum, but nice touch! Keep up the good work!
The words are so strong but it fits right to your poem...
Releasing your emotions are not bad at all... Great job...