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So cold
With skin cold as ice
Your hand on my heart
A tight grip it keeps
Squeezing out the warmth
Within' me it beats
Feel the pulse so weak
Lips so blue
I'm falling straight down
Into this nightmare
somewhat of a dream
Your stare cold
Your touch freezing
Killing my soul
A tight grip you keep
Bringing me to my knees
I'm falling down
Unable to be shiver
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Re: So cold
Oooo o.O Nice one SC. Short and descriptive and nice words you chose.
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Re: So cold
Another sort poem that is able to the reader to link with the scene of darkness.The fact that it is short is this poem's strength as the reader can see your opinion of a simple,yet complex convept of the term 'darkness'.