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    So cold

    With skin cold as ice
    Your hand on my heart
    A tight grip it keeps
    Squeezing out the warmth
    Within' me it beats
    Feel the pulse so weak
    Lips so blue
    I'm falling straight down
    Into this nightmare
    somewhat of a dream
    Your stare cold
    Your touch freezing
    Killing my soul
    A tight grip you keep
    Bringing me to my knees
    I'm falling down
    Unable to be shiver

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    Re: So cold

    Oooo o.O Nice one SC. Short and descriptive and nice words you chose.

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    Re: So cold

    Another sort poem that is able to the reader to link with the scene of darkness.The fact that it is short is this poem's strength as the reader can see your opinion of a simple,yet complex convept of the term 'darkness'.

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