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    So hard to say I love you

    I cant seem to move my lips
    The sadness is visible in your eyes
    But I cant push my self to lie

    Those simple words can kill me so
    I promise our friendship will never end
    You'll be my closest friend

    But please o please don’t push me
    To say those three simple words
    That help so much pain occur

    I don’t want hurt you with those words
    But I see your hurting without them
    Don’t push me to say words so grim

    Will those words please you?
    Are you willing for me to lie to you?
    I’m so sorry you feel for me but I want you to go

    Its not you its me
    But why do you stay by my side?
    No matter how I push you a side

    Your always behind me no matter how I push you away
    Why do you do these things you do?
    Do you feel those words like I used to?

    I understand that you do
    Can you wait till I feel the same as you?
    Can you wait till I can say I Love You?
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    Re: So hard to say I love you

    awwwwwww.... so sweet nice poem ^_^ I like it nice flow.

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    Re: So hard to say I love you

    Its a good poem I like it but it was a little confusing to me. Maybe if you go through and reread it seeing there is some typos and you fix it. Then it would be so much better. Dont take my words mean because they are not meant that way I'm just giving suggestions.

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    Re: So hard to say I love you

    that was a good peom, i liked it alot it had a flow to it, but it sort of lost me for a second


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    Re: So hard to say I love you

    Wow! Outstanding job Shippo the wording and the flow of the poem are awesome! And saying I love you is a hard thing to do! Keep up the great job!

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