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Jan 02, 2007, 02:48 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a banana
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 Credits: 4,261 | So hard to say I love you I cant seem to move my lips The sadness is visible in your eyes But I cant push my self to lie Those simple words can kill me so I promise our friendship will never end You'll be my closest friend But please o please don’t push me To say those three simple words That help so much pain occur I don’t want hurt you with those words But I see your hurting without them Don’t push me to say words so grim Will those words please you? Are you willing for me to lie to you? I’m so sorry you feel for me but I want you to go Its not you its me But why do you stay by my side? No matter how I push you a side Your always behind me no matter how I push you away Why do you do these things you do? Do you feel those words like I used to? I understand that you do Can you wait till I feel the same as you? Can you wait till I can say I Love You?
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Jan 02, 2007, 09:13 PM
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  Lost In My Own World  Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Fruityville, Florida
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 Credits: 5,069 | Re: So hard to say I love you Its a good poem I like it but it was a little confusing to me. Maybe if you go through and reread it seeing there is some typos and you fix it. Then it would be so much better. Dont take my words mean because they are not meant that way I'm just giving suggestions. |
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Jan 03, 2007, 09:25 AM
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Credits: 160 | Re: So hard to say I love you that was a good peom, i liked it alot it had a flow to it, but it sort of lost me for a second
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Jan 03, 2007, 09:28 AM
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 Upcoming Legend  Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility
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Credits: 1,176 | Re: So hard to say I love you Wow! Outstanding job Shippo the wording and the flow of the poem are awesome! And saying I love you is a hard thing to do! Keep up the great job!
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