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Reply With Quoteawwwwwww.... so sweet nice poem ^_^ I like it nice flow.
I cant seem to move my lips
The sadness is visible in your eyes
But I cant push my self to lie
Those simple words can kill me so
I promise our friendship will never end
You'll be my closest friend
But please o please don’t push me
To say those three simple words
That help so much pain occur
I don’t want hurt you with those words
But I see your hurting without them
Don’t push me to say words so grim
Will those words please you?
Are you willing for me to lie to you?
I’m so sorry you feel for me but I want you to go
Its not you its me
But why do you stay by my side?
No matter how I push you a side
Your always behind me no matter how I push you away
Why do you do these things you do?
Do you feel those words like I used to?
I understand that you do
Can you wait till I feel the same as you?
Can you wait till I can say I Love You?
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awwwwwww.... so sweet nice poem ^_^ I like it nice flow.
Its a good poem I like it but it was a little confusing to me. Maybe if you go through and reread it seeing there is some typos and you fix it. Then it would be so much better. Dont take my words mean because they are not meant that way I'm just giving suggestions.
that was a good peom, i liked it alot it had a flow to it, but it sort of lost me for a second
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Wow! Outstanding job Shippo the wording and the flow of the poem are awesome! And saying I love you is a hard thing to do! Keep up the great job!
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