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    ~So Much~

    So much trust i gave
    To such a sinful person
    So much love I gave
    To a guilty person
    So much hope i have
    For a useless person
    So many chances I've taken
    For this Idiot Person

    All these things you say
    Feel as though they're true
    But I only have one thing to say
    It's that I love you


    I know it's short and simple, It's usually not my thing, but all i am going to say is that i hope you like it and tell me what you think..

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    Re: ~So Much~

    interesting poem jamie
    maybe it's short and simple but it says alot^^
    keep up the good work

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    Re: ~So Much~

    good job Jamie it may be hort but sometimes short is better.
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    Re: ~So Much~

    Quote Originally Posted by Jamie5192 View Post
    So much trust i gave
    To such a sinful person
    So much love I gave
    To a guilty person
    So much hope i have
    For a useless person
    So many chances I've taken
    For this Idiot Person

    All these things you say
    Feel as though they're true
    But I only have one thing to say
    It's that I love you


    I know it's short and simple, It's usually not my thing, but all i am going to say is that i hope you like it and tell me what you think..
    Am I the first person? Just kidding. I like it. It has good continuity.

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    Quote Originally Posted by divine_punishment View Post
    Am I the first person? Just kidding. I like it. It has good continuity.

    *smiles* thanks. It means a lot to me that you think so. All of you. Thanks.^-^

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    Re: ~So Much~

    wow alot of pain, do you understand what your saying your trusting someone that betrayed you... can you really do that to yourself.

    im not just going to be one of them people that overlooks what you said, i see your pain in the words you speak, to me i just dont understand how u can love someone that betrays you, because once they betray you they will always betray you again.
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    Re: ~So Much~

    *looks at jadder's post* @.@ ouch... that hurts... *looks behind me* darn...what a big invisible arrow...

    *clears throat* nicely done jamie ^^ its short but it says it all.. kudos to u... and u even got jadders comment~!! gah~!! i never got 1.. T.T

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    Re: ~So Much~

    Quote Originally Posted by jaderabbit View Post
    wow alot of pain, do you understand what your saying your trusting someone that betrayed you... can you really do that to yourself.

    im not just going to be one of them people that overlooks what you said, i see your pain in the words you speak, to me i just dont understand how u can love someone that betrays you, because once they betray you they will always betray you again.
    yes. I know what i am saying and if you truly love that person you will be able to forgive and forget anything that they have done. If you can't say that you will be able to do that then you haven't found the right one yet. You will eventually and you will look back and realize that you were wrong. In the first place, I don't care if you over look what i'm saying or not, that's your choice. For two, I think you should realize that some people are sorry for the choices they make and wish that they had never done it in the first place. For three, I know that there is pain in my words. I think i know more about i than you ever will but what you don't realize is that just makes the poem better. Don't judge people you don't know, you don't know their situation. Betrayal is something that everyone does and your theory is wrong. It's wrong for so many reasons but i am not going ot get into them ...

    Thank you for you post and i like the fact that you was honest but you really need to think before you speak.

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