~So Much~

!Jamie5192 · Sep 08, 2007, 01:39 AM

So much trust i gave
To such a sinful person
So much love I gave
To a guilty person
So much hope i have
For a useless person
So many chances I've taken
For this Idiot Person

All these things you say
Feel as though they're true
But I only have one thing to say
It's that I love you

I know it's short and simple, It's usually not my thing, but all i am going to say is that i hope you like it and tell me what you think..

arekandera · Sep 08, 2007, 02:12 AM

interesting poem jamie
maybe it's short and simple but it says alot^^
keep up the good work

Ichigo_06 · Sep 14, 2007, 06:18 PM

good job Jamie it may be hort but sometimes short is better.

*divine_punishment* · Sep 14, 2007, 06:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jamie5192

So much trust i gave
To such a sinful person
So much love I gave
To a guilty person
So much hope i have
For a useless person
So many chances I've taken
For this Idiot Person

All these things you say
Feel as though they're true
But I only have one thing to say
It's that I love you

I know it's short and simple, It's usually not my thing, but all i am going to say is that i hope you like it and tell me what you think..

Am I the first person?

Just kidding. I like it. It has good continuity.

!Jamie5192 · Sep 14, 2007, 06:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by divine_punishment

Am I the first person?

Just kidding. I like it. It has good continuity.

*smiles* thanks. It means a lot to me that you think so. All of you. Thanks.^-^

*jaderabbit* · Sep 14, 2007, 10:46 PM

wow alot of pain, do you understand what your saying your trusting someone that betrayed you... can you really do that to yourself.

im not just going to be one of them people that overlooks what you said, i see your pain in the words you speak, to me i just dont understand how u can love someone that betrays you, because once they betray you they will always betray you again.

*RayMe* · Sep 15, 2007, 08:07 AM

*looks at jadder's post* @.@ ouch... that hurts... *looks behind me* darn...what a big invisible arrow...

*clears throat* nicely done jamie ^^

its short but it says it all..

kudos to u... and u even got jadders comment~!! gah~!!

i never got 1.. T.T

!Jamie5192 · Sep 15, 2007, 08:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jaderabbit

wow alot of pain, do you understand what your saying your trusting someone that betrayed you... can you really do that to yourself.

im not just going to be one of them people that overlooks what you said, i see your pain in the words you speak, to me i just dont understand how u can love someone that betrays you, because once they betray you they will always betray you again.

yes. I know what i am saying and if you truly love that person you will be able to forgive and forget anything that they have done. If you can't say that you will be able to do that then you haven't found the right one yet. You will eventually and you will look back and realize that you were wrong. In the first place, I don't care if you over look what i'm saying or not, that's your choice. For two, I think you should realize that some people are sorry for the choices they make and wish that they had never done it in the first place. For three, I know that there is pain in my words. I think i know more about i than you ever will but what you don't realize is that just makes the poem better. Don't judge people you don't know, you don't know their situation. Betrayal is something that everyone does and your theory is wrong. It's wrong for so many reasons but i am not going ot get into them ...

Thank you for you post and i like the fact that you was honest but you really need to think before you speak.

Astaroth · Sep 15, 2007, 12:30 PM

Wow.......great stuff here!!!
The words are full of passion and emotions......nicely done.

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!Jamie5192 Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 377 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -184	~So Much~ So much trust i gave To such a sinful person So much love I gave To a guilty person So much hope i have For a useless person So many chances I've taken For this Idiot Person All these things you say Feel as though they're true But I only have one thing to say It's that I love you I know it's short and simple, It's usually not my thing, but all i am going to say is that i hope you like it and tell me what you think..
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