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    So much more...

    You are more than my best friend.
    The closest person to me in my life.
    You are the only one who knows how I
    tick. The only one who knows how to
    make me feel better.

    You are more than an ex-girlfriend.
    You were more than a GIRLFRIEND to me!
    The only thing more precious than you
    is life itself. You've made an impact
    in my life. You're my jewel...

    You are more than a lover.
    Our love for eachother has never ceased
    to grow. Your skin, soft as silk;
    your touch sends shivers up my spine.

    You mean so much more to me than
    anyone ever has or ever will. You
    and I are one. You will always have
    a place in my heart for as long as I live.
    Because you are so much more to me...


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    Re: So much more...

    Awww.....this is so sweet!!!!!!!
    I love it!!!!!!!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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    Re: So much more...

    @.@ sweet indeed... but..ex's...i dont think you should mourn over what you lose.. well... not at all..but you can mourn..just dont let it made your life miserable..

    try to move on as quick as possible...

    nicely done... like always...nice way with wording..and the flourishing of emotions.. ^^

    Keep it up

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    Re: So much more...

    Thanks you two! I appreciate your comments and support. I hope you will like my other poems as well. I've been on a poem writing frenzy for the last twelve hours, so I'm trying to decide what I should post today. ^_^


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    Re: So much more...

    Rayme is right. It's one thing to treasure what you had and lost and another to mourn continually. This is a really beautiful poem, and not just because I know who it's written to. but because even if I were an outside viewer it would have touched my heart. You can feel what you feel, through your words. I like the style of this too, because without the strict rhyming you seem to get your feelings out more...unrestricted. That's a good word.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: So much more...

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    Rayme is right. It's one thing to treasure what you had and lost and another to mourn continually. This is a really beautiful poem, and not just because I know who it's written to. but because even if I were an outside viewer it would have touched my heart. You can feel what you feel, through your words. I like the style of this too, because without the strict rhyming you seem to get your feelings out more...unrestricted. That's a good word.
    Why, thank you lady! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it so much! Yeah, mourning sucks, but what can ya do? I'm trying to look at things more positively since we last spoke on things, so we'll see how my poetry turns out once I post my poem I wrote last night and write some more. ^_^


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    Grah. I suppose. I don't ever really stop the whole thing so I'm not one to talk. I never really get over anything.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: So much more...

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    @.@ sweet indeed... but..ex's...i dont think you should mourn over what you lose.. well... not at all..but you can mourn..just dont let it made your life miserable..

    try to move on as quick as possible...

    nicely done... like always...nice way with wording..and the flourishing of emotions.. ^^

    Keep it up
    I agree with ray and you know sprout there is one thing I can say with this one too, it is an old saying they used to use, but it is hardly heard anymore, "If you love something you have to let it go and if it comes back to you then it was ment to be but if not then....." Hum forgot the rest of it guess I didnt like that part. lol anyways keep up the work man I am loving your poems. way better then mine deeper too, the ones from the heart are the strongest ones and yes you can feel your pain through the words you write. *places a hand over my heart* I solute you! keep up the work and you help me to write better as well. lol
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