I agree with ray and you know sprout there is one thing I can say with this one too, it is an old saying they used to use, but it is hardly heard anymore, "If you love something you have to let it go and if it comes back to you then it was ment to be but if not then....." Hum forgot the rest of it guess I didnt like that part. lol anyways keep up the work man I am loving your poems. way better then mine deeper too, the ones from the heart are the strongest ones and yes you can feel your pain through the words you write. *places a hand over my heart* I solute you! keep up the work and you help me to write better as well. lol
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ I didn't expect to get so many good comments about this one. It makes me happy to know that you and everyone else thus far is in to my writing.