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    Re: So Near Yet So Far

    Lemme think... In January... I was slacking a lot then... I'm not too sure... It all depends on my mood... At most two hours, I think. But I spent the better part of the time counting the syllabus. ^^ I wanted it to be like a song... But it didn't really turn out that way.

    By the way, it doesn't refer to someone I know, and like. Though it can be seen in that context. It was more like pinning for... Seeing someone you know you can't. I was listening to Josh Groban at that time, so I guess that it was my 'inspiration', hahas, he was my subject anyway I think.

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    Re: So Near Yet So Far

    Hmm...a beautifully written poem.. i like it ^^

    sigh... i never felt anything like that yet.. i hope someday i will xD but this only girls feel them rite? @.@ now im confused

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    Re: So Near Yet So Far

    Such a sweet poem and well written. I know how it feels to be so lcose to someone and yet so far.
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    Wow! You did an awesome job on this poem! I agree with Cherry that is sad, but it sweet as well! Keep writing poetry and I will keep reading! Looking forward to more of your work!

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    Re: So Near Yet So Far

    OH LALA... very touching poem there.. nice one louisa!
    its very nice to read over and over again.
    you can feel the longing and love, its there girl!
    i love it too! keep it up.. =)

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    Re: So Near Yet So Far

    RayMe --> Actually, no... I don't think it's only girls that will feel like that. I mean, how can guys not? Males are still human, they have quite similar emotional... Needs? I'm not too sure if anyone can understand my warped idealogy...

    CherryBlossom18 --> Hahas... We're in the same boat... LOL. I know him 'verbally' but I don't know him physically... Weird...

    bluefox1 --> It's sweet? That's good I guess, my friend called it mushy? Is it? I'm not too sure, I can't even define 'mushy'...

    Lotski--> Thank you! I don't really dare to re-read my poems once I'm done, maybe only to 'clean up' the stucture but never for leisure. I'm not too fond of the hundreds of memory that's 'stored' in my poems. Love. What's is really love? I'm hazy on that too. I'm dumb when it comes to 'love'.

    >.<" I can't possibly know and love the subject of my poem right? After all, this is Josh Groban I'm talking about. I don't think he'll ever come to Singapore to perform, not that I can afford it anyway...

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