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    Re: Soledad

    Quote Originally Posted by Jairo View Post
    Una briza de soledad me inunda,
    En las heridas mas profundas;
    Me siento solo y no se que aser,
    No ago nada mas que seder.

    Ocupo alluda bien lo se,
    Porque este no es el camino que yo traze;
    Ocupo a alguien que me allude,
    Pues lo intente y yo no pude.

    La oscuridad que me roddea debe ser vencida,
    La luz que me alumbraba debe ser ensendida;
    Ocupo una razon para poder bolver
    Y escapar a la oscuridad que me ase seder.
    A wind of loneliness floods me,
    In the most deepest of wounds;
    I feel alone and I don't know what to do,
    I do nothing but seder. (I forgot what it meant I think its continue)

    I can get help I know I can,
    Because this isn't the way that I traze. (don't know what that is)
    I can get someone to help,
    I intend to but I cannot.

    The darkness surrounds me I should be vanquished,
    The light that guides me should be lit,
    I have a to reason for me to return
    And escape the darkness that makes me seder. (or continue I think).

    My translation wasn't great its been awhile.

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    Re: Soledad

    Uau! Buen trabajo! Mantener el buen trabajo!

    for all you english people who want to know what i said. here.

    wow! Great job! keep up the good work!

    good translation solking!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Soledad

    great poem and great translating i can read it in spanish as well because thats my job to be a translater great way you didnt rhyme it because it sounds better that way i see your new in the poem section write more keep up the good work

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    Re: Soledad

    Such a beautiful poem! Spanish always makes things better; it's such a lovely language. Well done, indeed.

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    Re: Soledad

    WoW!!!! O.o I was really upset cuz I couldn't read it but now... after solking's translation I can say: "My god! That is great!!!!" A really, really wonderful poem, wonderful dark mood, nice wording (or is it cuz of solking? )... great!

    Can't you write in English? If not I must get some help from my friends cuz I really do want to read more from you...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Hey thanks for helping me out, u'r traduction is very good, I like it.
    I think "seder" means to give up. and "Traze" well correctly its spell "trace" and it mans drew.

    well Lasura I can write and translate to but my english is not 100% develop, and i stell having a lot of trouble w/ spelling.
    I will try to translate the rest of my poems, so u could read it.
    Last edited by gren; Nov 02, 2007 at 04:34 PM.
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    Re: Soledad

    ooh @.@ it is a good poem... see~! i Knew it~! xD beautifully written and ty solking for the translation...

    And keep it up Jairo

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    Re: Soledad

    i WROTE ANOTER ONE IT CALL "DANO "DAMAE""
    i TRANSLATE IT. FOR YOU TO UNDERSTAND.
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

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