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    Solitude of Summer Beaches

    Clear thoughts,

    It must be a simple crime
    To have this peace alone
    Not hindered by others.

    Soothing whispers and caresses
    from a Gulf warmed wind,
    Tugging gently on pulled back hair.

    Calming present troubles
    Within a single moment
    Of waves crashing on sand.

    Clouds and birds compete in flight,
    Playing tag in emerald air
    Chased by reflections
    Of fish and islands, safely cradled,
    In aqua heavens.

    Warm sand and cool air
    Wrap comfort close,
    Solitude of summer beaches
    Bring emotions to rest.

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: Solitude of Summer Beaches

    Last two lines made you my daily hero.

    You make good stuff I've seen. Practised or skilled beginner I wonder. In any case, you can only improve upon what is already good.. (I'm a kiss ass ^^)
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: Solitude of Summer Beaches

    lol,I guess i'll try-
    by the way,I had practice on writing different kinds of poems ^,~

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    Re: Solitude of Summer Beaches

    Yeah...u are quite good.. i liked it...nice theme...i never felt summer in other country...but i can feel how it's like now ^^ a peaceful summer...on a beach though i live near the sea here.. on an island

    ^^ would love to read more of yours...keep up the good work ^^

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