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  1. Oct 02, 2006 09:50 AM #1
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    Some how I'm gone

    You shot my brain
    Stabbed my heart
    Burned my body
    And crushed my soul
    I never thought you could
    I never thought you would
    Destroy me completely
    At those places I stayed
    Those places I slept
    Those places I thought I was 4 ever kept
    You killed the memories
    The memories of me
    Now I’m no longer here
    Now I’m no longer there
    Now I’m no longer anywhere
    I’m gone
    Out of site
    Out of mind
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    .............................im sorry shippo!!!
    nice poem and i can tell your mad. probally at me

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  3. Oct 03, 2006 06:38 AM #3
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    nice passion and very enthusaim, keep it up!

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  4. Oct 03, 2006 06:54 AM #4
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    Ha ha ha! Well i'm to cool to come in the room alone
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    It is a very lovely poem. The use of detail. Very good ^-^
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    Ah, when was the last time I remember warning some of you for spamming and chatting on the boards? And, what part of the AO rules are hard to understand? Please don't ever let me find you guys chatting!!
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  7. Oct 05, 2006 12:27 AM #7
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    Wow!!! This is a really awesome poem you've got here Shippo!!! The power of emotions in this was amazing!!! Awesome job Shippo!!!
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  8. Oct 05, 2006 01:30 AM #8
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    Hey Shippo,

    Awesome use of emotion! I can feel the anger the surrounds this poem! Keeep up the good work! Awesome job!
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