some love poem (did at school)

Being with your love means everything in the world ...

To have him/her in your room with incents and soft playing music...

One thing becomes another

Such wonderful feelings...

Yet to try it with someone else

Isn’t as great when you don’t feel for that person

And only need them for sexual needs...

I love one and only one true but he has a girlfriend

I love him even though I can’t have him

Even if he doesn’t feel the same..

But to use someone for a cyber isn’t as pleasing because it isn’t passionate
or wanted from one person...

( incents are them things u brun and there smoke is all smelly ^^ a good smell tho haha)

Hmm the starting to this poem is good.. but when you started saying trying it with some1else... sheesh...did'nt go well...my opinion that is... but it is a good poem ^^ keep up the good work.. :)

good work Eqquin. nicely done. keep up the good work. I like it, it is different, but that is not always a bad thing. I cant wait to see more

thank you v much both of you for the wonderful comments ^__^ yeah diffrent isnt always a bad thing huh ^^

i like this.it expreses alot of feelings && thoughs into someone mind .very good hope to see more^^