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    some old poems

    Since there's so many new people here on AO, I might as well share these with all the new faces. Hmm... Well, enjoy. Have a nice day. ~[Ih]

    yeah...
    here's some of my old poetry
    I don't know
    just wanted to share
    these three poems are the only ones I've ever written and finished
    I haven't been in the mood for writing poetry lately
    so... yeah... enjoy!?

    [ dot dot dot ]

    alone in my room (sitting in the dark)
    my eyes begin to blur as I stare at the light
    the curtains close shut
    sick of the light that taunts me
    everything goes dark
    (just the way I like it)
    tired of my empathy
    I turn everything off
    I try not to care anymore
    alone with my thoughts
    trying not to think of you
    because it hurts too much
    attachment, containment
    suppression, regression
    change myself for you
    (kill myself for you)
    bottle everything up
    but it’s leaking out
    don’t wanna sound like another cliché
    but I just can’t get you out of my thoughts
    is there something wrong with me? (or is this just “love“?)
    must be the old depressed me trying to get back out
    I don’t know what to do (don’t know what to say)
    it hasn’t been that long, but I still miss you
    I still miss you anyway…
    I must sound either crazy or pathetic
    you must think I’m strange or weird
    why am I so different?
    (why am I cursed with this empathy?)
    why do I care so much?
    I cry in the inside (it dies in the inside)
    the depression fades away
    but then it just comes back…

    [ 2:15 AM ]

    Bored and borderline.
    Listening to sad songs.
    Tired. (So tired.) But I can't sleep.
    Buried in my thoughts. (Thinking of you.)
    My angel who longs for her wings.
    Why do you love a soulless devil like me?
    Cast off from the kingdom of homemade gods.
    (The church of lambs to the slaughter.)
    Drifting off into the sea of oblivion.
    I wait in the shadows. (Nod and smile.)
    Waiting for our reunion. (Watching the clouds go by.)
    Separated from the rest of the world.
    Deep-seated distaste for my isolation.
    My escape is in the horizon.
    But it's too far a distance to reach.
    Chin down (stare at the ground) as my eyes burn.
    Consumed by my doubts, by my regrets.
    Like vultures on a carcass.
    Cadavers ripped open for all to see.
    (An all-you-can-eat buffet for the masses!)
    I'm falling apart by the seams.
    Piece by piece, it loses its meaning.
    The sum of my parts is nothing.
    I've lost my worth. I've lost my reason.
    Precious minutes wasted believing.
    That these thoughts would just go away.
    My integrity falters and my mask disappears.
    My weaknesses are revealed.
    Sinking faster into the depression.
    Just waiting for someone to pull me out.

    [ Longing ]

    I can't see you in my dreams
    (vague, blurred, and forgotten)
    can't see you in my mind's eye
    blinded by those feelings that I feel that are sad
    longing for another glimpse of my angel
    so all my demons can rest in peace
    drowning in that sea of hurt
    (that I've made for myself)
    I pull myself out and I open my eyes
    (hoping) to see your warm green stare looking back
    you see right through me (and see me for what I am)
    just for you, I shed my old skin (my old face)
    my former self is comatose (a vegetable)
    (an infection) still seeping into my very self
    I long to pull the plug (kill him off for good)
    and step ever closer to the light (closer to you)
    no longer will I hide in the shade of his shadow.
    (open my eyes) no longer blinded from the truth
    looking up instead of down (seeing with eyes unclouded)
    wishing only to be with you
    longing to create more happy memories
    to fill up the void

    good times
    Last edited by Innerhell; Jun 25, 2006 at 08:34 AM.
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    Re: some old poems

    Yes I have read your poems before.
    I love em....You are great with rhyming and making the Poem just Flow and yet keep what you want to say without straying.

    Very very nice^^

    Thanks Pyroo. :]

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    Re: some old poems

    Nice................................
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    Re: some old poems

    Cool. They are all neat, and different. Yup
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    Re: some old poems

    i like it....especially the wordings lol.... but it's cool...

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    Re: some old poems

    I BUMP this up for the sake of sharing my poetry with everyone. Straight from Page 11. Woo... Good times. Hope you all like them. Enjoy.
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    Re: some old poems

    Love your work, i love how you have whispers in your poetry. Sorta like a schitzophrenia with it. Awesome! You should make a book or somethin!

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    Re: some old poems

    i agree these poems
    really are good i would buy a book if you made one
    no lie . those poems are great
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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