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    Some poem this is ...

    What is love?
    That sweet overwhelming feeling I get …
    Just by thinking about it I feel warm, but my heart is just too …
    Cold, ruthless, rejecting every time I get that feeling,
    That feeling of being with her, my heart just won’t bow to it,
    I’m tired of this, tired of being forlorn

    I feel my tears roll down my face, warms tears,
    Which get cold as the wind blows,
    I grieve just by looking at the people,
    Who have their perfect significant other,
    In the streets, in their homes, in their private rooms … everywhere
    Caressing each other with love in their eyes

    I just sit there as the wind blows against me,
    As if telling me to go away …
    Or to move on, to follow the wind
    Like it’s sending me somewhere, to something I’ve been searching,
    But my heart tosses the feeling away, the only things which are left …
    Are pain, misery, loneliness, and a hope that can only be dreamed about

    Maybe I wasn’t meant to love, maybe I’m just meant to be lonely
    Lonely with only fake smiles and false joy that are left with me
    What am I? Why can’t I get what I wanted?
    But who would love someone like me,
    Someone who rejects every feeling for love he gets,
    Someone who’s alone, cold and miserable

    Who needs to be loved? It’s a painful thing
    Which has caused me nothing else but to be heartbroken
    Every time I liked someone, that person would go away who’s in love with someone else
    Someone who’s better, charming, understanding …
    I’m nothing but a loner, who doesn’t deserve to be cared about

    I stand there in the street, every time I see someone; they have their one mate
    One mate for life who will always stay beside their beloved one
    The wind stops, like it’s given up trying on me
    I don’t blame it; I’m better alone anyway

    As I try to rebel against my cold heart,
    The feelings flood in mixed with the pain from the past
    I close my eyes and look away, tears falling again
    Looking at the never-ending horizon and the majestic Sun,
    Which is sharing its warmth with everyone


    I smile as the wind ruffles my hair; which hid my face all along
    The sun shines on my face with warmth spreading all over my body
    Even the tears feel warm against my face
    I let it all out and my heart feels lighter

    I promise to myself; I won’t be a hopeless person again
    With no dreams, with no emotions and with a cold heart
    Not ever. I’d be like the Sun
    Which shares its warmth, gives life, gives a hope of surviving
    A light that brightens up the dark sky which everyone likes to see
    Be a nurturer and brighten up every person’s life
    Until I fade away forever

    Even if this life didn't have any meaning
    This world is a cultivation of paranoia and ego
    I’ll bloom a beautiful flower,
    Don’t end it drastically

    Good things come and go
    But be strong and never lose faith
    I’ll be strong even though my heart is something else

    Mehh ... I hope you all like it

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    Re: Some poem this is ...

    Very long.....nice one..hope you will visit my poem Pride too...thanks,,,,

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    I love your poem Rushil....
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    Re: Some poem this is ...

    Even if this life didn't have any meaning
    This world is a cultivation of paranoia and ego
    I’ll bloom a beautiful flower,
    Don’t end it drastically

    i love this part it details everything everyone
    feels when they begin to have hope and decide to
    never give up. wich is what love is for . sure they say love is for
    everyone but thats not true love isnt for the faint of heart
    because of the many roads it lleads you down so you have
    to be able to handle it with pride ,conviction, and loyalty
    till forever ends. this poem say's so much yes it is simple
    wich love never is awesome poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Some poem this is ...

    verry long dude. well i liked it. nice use of words

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    Re: Some poem this is ...

    i like this poem. it's long but good. Keep it up!!!
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    O.O wow, that was amazing brother. it was very touching and i loved it *is speechless now*


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    Re: Some poem this is ...

    Thank you everyone, glad you liked it ^^

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