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    some poems of mine

    some may be a little cheesy but i am proud of them all ^.^

    A True Friend

    Time and time again, without fail, without end,
    You touched and soothed my confused and aching heart.
    With your love and comforting, my heart, you mend,
    As a friend whom will never ignore nor part.
    With that kindness and sweetness, you gave, so much,
    It has given me courage, solace, and bliss.
    You are a true friend, pure of heart, and as such,
    I'll treasure our love and seal it with a kiss.
    What you gave i don't deserve, you know, it's true,
    All that i can reply is, "merci beaucoup."
    My feelings, though puzzling, ring pure and true,
    These feelings are the love that i have for you.


    Valentine

    In my heart,
    I always knew.
    Even when apart,
    We'd stick like glue.

    Through thick and thin,
    I'll always be here.
    I'll find a way to make you grin,
    Even if i must shed a tear.

    Then i thought the entire day,
    Walking till i found a sign.
    It enlightened me on what to say,
    "Will you be my valentine?"


    Get Well Soon

    Flowers in bloom;
    Both pure and true.
    Flowers in bloom;
    From me to you.
    Flowers in bloom;
    Bright as the moon
    Flowers in bloom;
    To get well soon.


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    White roses are such a beautiful sight,
    Its rare beauty shining both day and night.
    Wondrous still, its beauty under moonlight,
    Still, it can't compare to you, my delight.

    Roses are kind and sweet without a doubt,
    Perfection they are, both inside and out.
    Their perfection reminds me as I shout,
    Happy thoughts of you as I run about.

    The allure of the roses can entrance,
    Making you watch as the wind makes them dance.
    Casting their spells, with their powerful chants,
    Make me blush with thoughts of you and romance.

    As I stand up tall and proud, the wind blew,
    With the sun gleaming off the morning dew.
    Reminding me with thoughts both pure and true,
    Those many thoughts are of why i love you.

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    Re: some poems of mine

    Hey I like your poems but i think you should post one poem at a time ya know...so people can post on that poem and so they don't have to worry about the others...but i do like your poems!!! there great!!!!
    Moving on Is the hardest Part

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    Re: some poems of mine

    i put them together becuase i didnt want to be cited for spamming or anything, and you can comment on just one, i dont mind ^.^
    thanks for your kind words though

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