Someone Cares...

Someone will always care for you.

Someone will always try to help you in your time of need.

Someone will always be by your side, during the good and bad.

Someone will always be your best friend--no matter what.

Someone will alsways have a shoulder for you to cry on.

Someone will always try to protect you from harm.

Someone cares, and loves you very much.

That someone is me... And I'm always here if you need me.
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I wrote this on 1/14/07 for my best friend. She's going through some things right now, and I care deeply about her. I just wanted to post this, because I was quite pleased with it, and I don't have the original copy, because it was written on a sketch I gave her. ^_^

The spaces arent needed. In fact, the poem would sound and look better if it were one complete stanza.

It was a pretty touchy poem. I like your spacing style too.

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Originally Posted by ketaro

It was a pretty touchy poem. I like your spacing style too.

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Thanks. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it. I usually don't write such touchy poems. But lately, that's all I've been writing.

watch the spelling of always!
nice ideas, and the repetition of 'sombody' gave me a feeling of constant comfort
your poem appealed to some things most of us do not have
made me cry (tries to find crying smilies)

(didnt find one)



....not rele

nice work!