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    I am a mess...on the floor.
    I am your mind, frozen in time.
    Without your actual knowlege of this incident.
    I have forgotten all the stupidity that you have spoken.
    Remembering wasn't an option.
    Leaving this all behind.
    I knew it was time.

    My soul; I fall to pieces.
    I thought I was strong enough.
    Beating this thought of dying.
    Holding this dream of living.
    Your face it flashes to many.
    I see you wherever I go.
    Your face is so distinctive.
    I'm so tired of it.
    I am over you.
    I've told myself over and over.
    It's hard to get the point across.

    Leaving you was the hardest thing I could have ever imagined.
    But, it was the one thing I surely had to do.
    I feared I never fall in Love again.
    It ahs been a long while.
    Looking to the ones closes to you.
    I saw someone new.
    Someone who you could have never expected.
    I saw your brother.

    Tell me what you think...I didn't really take my time on this one.
    "Quit the touchy, feely, self-help, yoga crap!"

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    AO's Demon Slayer Hexxagon Champion, Match Stick Soccer Champion Blade X may be famous one day Blade X may be famous one day Blade X's Avatar
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    Re: Someone new

    ouch.....sounds like kinda of love breaking off then u love the brother coz he's like ur ex. which is kinda wrong but hey wutever floats ur boat. i got nothing against it. it's quite good, flows quite well tho it kinda wavered at the end. But it's quite nice. keep it up

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Someone new

    wow that was pretty nice indeed, keep it up.

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    Re: Someone new

    I will have to agree with Blade X but it is still good

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
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    Re: Someone new

    I liked it until the brother part...I had to giggle then. But yeah, great stuff

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