.:G l o o m y:.

I am a mess...on the floor.
I am your mind, frozen in time.
Without your actual knowlege of this incident.
I have forgotten all the stupidity that you have spoken.
Remembering wasn't an option.
Leaving this all behind.
I knew it was time.

My soul; I fall to pieces.
I thought I was strong enough.
Beating this thought of dying.
Holding this dream of living.
Your face it flashes to many.
I see you wherever I go.
Your face is so distinctive.
I'm so tired of it.
I am over you.
I've told myself over and over.
It's hard to get the point across.

Leaving you was the hardest thing I could have ever imagined.
But, it was the one thing I surely had to do.
I feared I never fall in Love again.
It ahs been a long while.
Looking to the ones closes to you.
I saw someone new.
Someone who you could have never expected.
I saw your brother.

Tell me what you think...I didn't really take my time on this one.

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"Quit the touchy, feely, self-help, yoga crap!"

Blade X

ouch.....sounds like kinda of love breaking off then u love the brother coz he's like ur ex. which is kinda wrong but hey wutever floats ur boat. i got nothing against it. it's quite good, flows quite well tho it kinda wavered at the end. But it's quite nice. keep it up

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ketaro

wow that was pretty nice indeed, keep it up.

sora the king of dreams

I will have to agree with Blade X but it is still good

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I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

Sashacat

I liked it until the brother part...I had to giggle then. But yeah, great stuff