Something deep inside

Something deep inside

Why do I love you?
Why do I want you?
Why do I care?
Those are things up in the air
For I cannot say
Why you make my day
I cannot describe
The feeling inside
It's warm and fuzzy
whenever your there
So why do I feel these things?
I honestly can't say
But I can tell you
That you can't help
Falling in love
It's something that takes place
Deep inside

:(: Like I know who this is to.... :(:

Don't worry, we both are going through the same...you know...

Nice poem by the way...Really nice...
So many questions and so many.....answers .... :(:

*sighs*, I'd love to read more from you.

^^;

-x- Zainab -x-

Another great poem. Enjoyable to read and I like it. Keep up the great work. [:

Nice poem…but it seems to be missing something; then again I have been told that I lack subject knowledge’ on the issue (apparently I’m nearly incapable of feeling these emotions…well that’s what she said…lol). “Something deep inside” good title, it is also a song title on similar subject matter. I don’t mean to make light of a subject that is important to you…it is a good poem.

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Originally Posted by Autonomy

Nice poem…but it seems to be missing something; then again I have been told that I lack subject knowledge’ on the issue (apparently I’m nearly incapable of feeling these emotions…well that’s what she said…lol). “Something deep inside” good title, it is also a song title on similar subject matter. I don’t mean to make light of a subject that is important to you…it is a good poem.

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No.. it's alright. ^-^ I don't mind. I'm sure that you are perfectly capable of feeling these emotions... Maybe you just don't want others to know that you can.. *smiles* I'm just messing with ya. Oh, I didn't know it was a song title.... -.- hmm... who's the song by, if i may ask.

Thanks you guys. I'm glad you liked it.

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Originally Posted by AngelicDemon201092

No.. it's alright. ^-^ I don't mind. I'm sure that you are perfectly capable of feeling these emotions... Maybe you just don't want others to know that you can.. *smiles* I'm just messing with ya. Oh, I didn't know it was a song title.... -.- hmm... who's the song by, if i may ask.

Thanks you guys. I'm glad you liked it.

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Single by Billie Piper
from the album Walk of Life....i'v never heard it, but a friend was with me when i was reading your poem, and she said it was...it was a good poem though...:)
P.S. Your assumption just might be right!!! ;)

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Single by Billie Piper
from the album Walk of Life....i'v never heard it, but a friend was with me when i was reading your poem, and she said it was...it was a good poem though...:)
P.S. Your assumption just might be right!!! ;)

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lol... well thank you for the album and everything, I'll have to check it out. ^-^ I'm glad you liked it. lol see..^-^ o.o jeez.. -.- who don't i understand.. :p anyway.. ^-^ Thank you and I hope to see you around.

Yup!!!

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(..)you can't help
Falling in love

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... sometimes it seems just wonderful... but sometimes it's like the worst thing that has ever happened to you...

Anyways... A reall nice work, I love how you made it rhyme and I love the way you put such a great idea in such few words.. very nice! I hope to see more! ^^