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    Something deep inside


    Something deep inside

    Why do I love you?
    Why do I want you?
    Why do I care?
    Those are things up in the air
    For I cannot say
    Why you make my day
    I cannot describe
    The feeling inside
    It's warm and fuzzy
    whenever your there
    So why do I feel these things?
    I honestly can't say
    But I can tell you
    That you can't help
    Falling in love
    It's something that takes place
    Deep inside

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    Unhappy Re: Something deep inside

    Like I know who this is to....

    Don't worry, we both are going through the same...you know...

    Nice poem by the way...Really nice...
    So many questions and so many.....answers ....

    *sighs*, I'd love to read more from you.

    ^^;

    -x- Zainab -x-

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    Re: Something deep inside

    Another great poem. Enjoyable to read and I like it. Keep up the great work. [:

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    Re: Something deep inside

    Nice poem…but it seems to be missing something; then again I have been told that I lack subject knowledge’ on the issue (apparently I’m nearly incapable of feeling these emotions…well that’s what she said…lol). “Something deep inside” good title, it is also a song title on similar subject matter. I don’t mean to make light of a subject that is important to you…it is a good poem.

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    Re: Something deep inside

    Quote Originally Posted by Autonomy View Post
    Nice poem…but it seems to be missing something; then again I have been told that I lack subject knowledge’ on the issue (apparently I’m nearly incapable of feeling these emotions…well that’s what she said…lol). “Something deep inside” good title, it is also a song title on similar subject matter. I don’t mean to make light of a subject that is important to you…it is a good poem.
    No.. it's alright. ^-^ I don't mind. I'm sure that you are perfectly capable of feeling these emotions... Maybe you just don't want others to know that you can.. *smiles* I'm just messing with ya. Oh, I didn't know it was a song title.... -.- hmm... who's the song by, if i may ask.

    Thanks you guys. I'm glad you liked it.

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    Re: Something deep inside

    Quote Originally Posted by AngelicDemon201092 View Post
    No.. it's alright. ^-^ I don't mind. I'm sure that you are perfectly capable of feeling these emotions... Maybe you just don't want others to know that you can.. *smiles* I'm just messing with ya. Oh, I didn't know it was a song title.... -.- hmm... who's the song by, if i may ask.

    Thanks you guys. I'm glad you liked it.
    Single by Billie Piper
    from the album Walk of Life....i'v never heard it, but a friend was with me when i was reading your poem, and she said it was...it was a good poem though...
    P.S. Your assumption just might be right!!!

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    Re: Something deep inside

    Quote Originally Posted by Autonomy View Post
    Single by Billie Piper
    from the album Walk of Life....i'v never heard it, but a friend was with me when i was reading your poem, and she said it was...it was a good poem though...
    P.S. Your assumption just might be right!!!

    lol... well thank you for the album and everything, I'll have to check it out. ^-^ I'm glad you liked it. lol see..^-^ o.o jeez.. -.- who don't i understand.. anyway.. ^-^ Thank you and I hope to see you around.

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    Re: Something deep inside

    Yup!!!
    (..)you can't help
    Falling in love
    ... sometimes it seems just wonderful... but sometimes it's like the worst thing that has ever happened to you...

    Anyways... A reall nice work, I love how you made it rhyme and I love the way you put such a great idea in such few words.. very nice! I hope to see more! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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