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    Something I have no title for.

    Time after time
    I'm left all alone.
    I'll never be the same
    or so I'm told.

    Things just get so hard
    to hard to control.
    My friends tell me
    to just go with the flow.

    What do you do
    when the flow leads no where?
    It just leaves you
    standing alone with no one near.

    Time after time
    I am told
    to leave to sorrow being
    and let my life unfold.

    In the end
    I just cant wait
    to look and stand
    and just wait for that day.

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    Re: Something I have no title for.

    Hmm, good poem. Has immense potential. Might want to work of the flow of the rhythm. And spelling, dictionary.com is always your friend !

    Good poem. I'd love to see you try and work on it and edit it!! That would be nice

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