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    Something positive?

    Something positive,
    Well lets see,
    If I can even find,
    The best in me.

    When self lothating,
    Is all you see,
    It's so hard to,
    Be easy on me.

    Imperfections magnified.
    Where some others may take pride.
    It's just proof to me that,
    How your raised has more to do,

    With you and your personality,
    While I may not be the best,
    I know I'm not like all the rest,
    Which at best sets me aside.

    Compete if you want, make it a game or a fight.
    I just don't think that craps right.
    For you it may be the way things are,
    But for me, manors say it's just not right.

    T me it's not about,
    Right or wrong, worse or better.
    Winner or loser. For me,
    All it is, is me trying to survive and,

    Keep a smile upon my face,
    And a swing in my step.
    That's all that's important to me
    That and the same for those
    Surrounding me to be.

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    Not my best but I had to write to calm myself down yesterday after a "thing" with someone important to me. I probably should spend more time on this but when I do that I overanalyze and kill the feeling. It was hard enough to get it out as it is.

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    Re: Something positive?

    A "thing" eh? That could be any "thing". ^_^
    Anywho, I like it. I thought that you were gonna continue your rhyming, then you threw me off with the non-rhyming. It's like riding a bike, taking a sharp turn and losing your handle bars, LOL.

    Way to confuse me. Good poem.


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    Re: Something positive?

    Its very nice I like it,
    I like to write poems to but the onli problem is that i just write it in spanish.
    Do not dwell in the past... do not wonder about the future... just life the present to the fullness...

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    Re: Something positive?

    Yeah...well the rhyming wasn't intentional. I didn't realize it stopped when Iw as writing it. And yeah, it was an argument but not, just a disgussion really. But not a fun one.

    Jairo - Spanish is a great language. I bet it'd be appriciated, if you translated it too maybe? I bet your a good writer too!

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