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    Something That Will Never Be !!

    Love is full emotion not
    really carring what it's
    working for,i may sound
    like loosing it,but it's just
    i have to trust you more.

    It like an illusion that keep's
    you comming back saying
    i want more,i cant fight this
    atraction it's like a fire that's
    out of control.

    How i wish i could show you
    but it's not worth loosing you,
    god i wish it was easier when we talked
    and i didnt think of you that way
    if only love would stop maybe i wouldt
    be this way.

    You drive me out of my mind how i
    wish i could be with you ,but can't
    cause he has your heart but there never stopes
    us ,as we laugh and this moment is our's
    i love with everything but i know you can
    never return it ,life is crule that way.

    But as i say good buy till we meet again
    your my heart and i will never give up
    my love for you,Love what is with you?
    i want her now and your just being cruel.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Something That Will Never Be !!

    I really liked this. I really did. I know that this shows how you really feel and it is good to get it out with poetry because if you hold it in, it only gets worse. I am sorry you're so in love but she's taken. I'm sure she still cares about you a lot.
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    Re: Something That Will Never Be !!

    Hey bro! I liked this poem! You let out all your emotion and basically told us what you were feeling! The emotion was perfect in this poem! Great Work Bro!

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    Re: Something That Will Never Be !!

    Omg....wow..This was soooo awesome big bro!!! The emotions were soooooo strong in this new poem of your's! It's sad but beautiful at the sametime.Awesome job big bro.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Something That Will Never Be !!

    thankk you you everyonf for lieking it so much and im glad you understood it.

    @lil sis thanks for you comment and i apriceate it very much
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Something That Will Never Be !!

    OMG so sweet ^^ awesome and pretty poem, the type of poem I love!

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