Something's wrong and I can't find,
Where I lost my piece of mind.
All the chaos and all the turmoil
Really makes my blood fit to boil.
Friends and family acting cazily
Making me ask how can this be.
Who are you and what did you do
With the people who used to pull me through
The good times and the bad
And now you just make me sad
And wish that I could die
because all I can do is cry.
I found my path and I see the light.
I'll no longer put up with your plight.
My struggle is hard enough on my own
I don't need to worry which dog you give a bone
My heart is broken but my love is true
If I decide to give it to you
Please respect that you've been chosen to recive
Such a special gift from me.
Don't take it lightly and don't ignore it
Or I'll take it back in a fit.
Because I cannot consider you
If it's not the same thing you would do!
Wow, I like this one Chani. As far as poetry is concerned anyway. However it did pull out a plethura of uneasy emotions. Its obviously not a happy poem. Aside from the end, there was something about that ending. I know that as unlikely as it seems... I could very much relate to this:
Originally Posted by bratling
... Not Ever Again...
EEEXXXCEELLEENT!! ^_^
It's hard to tell who this is about at first, but I like it. Keep up the good work!
Wow. Thank you both.
Actually peach this one isn't so hard for me to believe that you can relate to. It doesn't suprise me at all. And... The ending is kind of... an expression of my bipolarness I guess. I go through ups and downs and I felt like at the end I was starting to stand up for myself. Where as in the begaining I'm just...lost and confused.
And Sprout, this one is about more then one person. In fact it's about EVERYONE that has a relationship with me at all. But I was thinking of two specific people when I was writing it. It's so weird to see how many people one certian thing can pertain to.
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