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Reply With QuoteI like your poem. I really hope everyone enjoys reading it! I hope to see more in the future.
sometimes dont you feel
like you just want to die
like maybe just sit there
and contiune to cry
i know how you feel
cause i feel it to
i want them to feel
our pain thats so strewn
so each time we cut
they grope their wrists in pain
and hopefully feel a suddin wave of shame
and remember they hurt us
and we hurt them now
suddenly sit back and think
about this and how
was i really that mean?
was i really that cruel?
but thats all behind us
causee now they feel our pain too
they bleed when we bleed
and they hurt when we do
hopefully they learned this lesson as well
by hurting others
you hurt yourself too
I like your poem. I really hope everyone enjoys reading it! I hope to see more in the future.
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
i really like your poem.i would try to post one but i dont want to because yours is so good and the last time i did that well lets just say there is proabaly some guy i norway laughing at me.
You should never hesitate in life because of fear of ridicule. A lot of people here are nice and nobody is going to openly insult you here. Plus, criticism helps you to improve.Originally Posted by Little negi sensei
Anyways, the poem was nice dark lover, but maybe splitting it up in stanzas would make it flow better. I say maybe becaue I am in no way a poem expert. Keep up the good work.
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Because they have obtained that level they are arrogant. You have to kep in mind when you talk about these guys they are kind of dorks who probably didn't excel at much and this is their only outlet to flex their muscles. Their egos would suffer no less so the the forum suffers some more. Watch one way or another they will probably repond to this post with a threat. But there are better forums out there. Private messege Zev.
Add correct captialization wouldnt hurt the poem as well.
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thanks all though i dint think this one of my best
i all ways love hear your thought
i liked it, it's sad but you give a reason on why you do it and explain yourself well.
I believe…whatever doesn't kill you simply makes you…stranger.
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Thanx Shin Ryuga!!!!
So true... but what...why would you write this, no one should be alone, we feel alone?...yes...Are we alone?...not always, I'm always alone but together we're not...
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