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    Sometimes everyone needs to shout.

    Sometimes everyone needs to shout out a little.
    Break through the ice. This words so cold and brittle.

    Sometimes the only way to find your inner peace.
    Is to scream it! Throw it!
    Exploit it. Show it.
    You've held it in. Now... just release....

    AAAaaaahhhhh!!!!!!

    In a world where its safe if you "bite your tongue."
    Let it all out. Even at the risk of being hung.

    Doesn’t matter how you look, as long as your voice is heard.
    Or you'll forever go unnoticed, like their whispering words.

    Because everyone out there has to scream. Has to holler.
    Cry your emotions. Yell wisdom. Bellow your fear. Roar power.

    Sometimes the way to fix it, is to let it break apart.
    'til your voice is faded,
    And your pains eliminated.
    No use in letting it sit, and just weigh down your heart.

    I find a good way to allow the negative to detach is to
    Yell and Scream it! Throw it in the air, then snatch it..

    ... then ChooOOke!

    I let it loose! As if there’s no one alive who can stop me.
    Take a crow bar to some sh*t, maybe go deface property.

    Sure, I could just write a poem. Or write it down in a letter.
    But, when I can see my destruction. That just makes me feel better.

    So I shout!
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Sometimes everyone needs to shout.

    Well it is a good way of letting out stress..to shout..
    interesting poem... ^^

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    Re: Sometimes everyone needs to shout.

    The rhyming seemed forced. But nice topic.
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    Re: Sometimes everyone needs to shout.

    oooh peach I know what that feels like
    sometimes the emotions just keep building
    wether from anger or dispare
    but it makes your throat so tight
    the best way is to release it in a scream
    shoot I've wanted to do that before >.<
    people just dont get me when I say that though
    nice to see it in writing
    you always do such a good job peach =)

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    Re: Sometimes everyone needs to shout.

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    The rhyming seemed forced. But nice topic.
    I stuggled very much with the composition of this poem. And when I was done I was still displeased. but I decide to post it because I had already spent so much time fighting through it.
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    Re: Sometimes everyone needs to shout.

    lol that sounded funny ^^ peach

    The feeling that builds up...(in anime goes from red to green purple)
    and... BOOM~!!!
    u get out of control...and shouting is 1 of the ways...

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    Re: Sometimes everyone needs to shout.

    I like this poem, very much. I enjoyed it, peach. Nice work. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems.

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    Re: Sometimes everyone needs to shout.

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    I stuggled very much with the composition of this poem. And when I was done I was still displeased. but I decide to post it because I had already spent so much time fighting through it.
    If yourself is not sastified with your work? I suggest to continue revising it. Your poetry should only please you.
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