Thread: Sometimes everyone needs to shout.

ohh la la...
Shout it all out guys! hahaha...
very cool poem, its better to shout than to kill
somebody and have sinned ain't it?
So bring all your anger out in one Loud shout!\

aaaaAAAAhhhhhh!!!!

that's mine, cause i'm mad now. hehehehe

Originally Posted by Lotski

ohh la la...
Shout it all out guys! hahaha...
very cool poem, its better to shout than to kill
somebody and have sinned ain't it?
So bring all your anger out in one Loud shout!\

aaaaAAAAhhhhhh!!!!

that's mine, cause i'm mad now. hehehehe

Yep, shouting (and destruction in my case) Keep me from doing things of a way worse nature.

Originally Posted by Kasai

If yourself is not sastified with your work? I suggest to continue revising it. Your poetry should only please you.

Do you paint Kasai? Well if you do, you may have heard of a painting which has been "over worked". Thats what happens when an artist gets so hung up on perfecting and correcting a piece, that they end up overworking it. Thusly, making it worse. This poem to me was becoming over worked... So I posted it before I ruined it further.