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Old Jun 18, 2008, 09:00 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Sometimes I Still Cry

Sometimes I still cry,
Because everwhere I look....

There in the cupboard, a dish...
I cooked for you.
I tried so hard and I wished...
To be important to you.
Still you fished....

To find more in your sea.
Someone to become what I tried so hard to be.

Sometimes I still cry,
Because everywhere I turn...

On my bed, there's a blanket.
You used to hold me.
I was so trusting. So naked.
So ignorant...
I never thought you would fake it.

You used this heart of mine...
To tide you over, to pass the time.

Sometimes I still cry.
The pain you caused, can't be shook.

Only because I believed all that you said.
When your intentions,
Were just to play with my head.
Don't greive the loss of you,
Just ache from being mislead.

You say to her, so easily...
...sweet things you used to say to me.

Sometimes I don't cry.
I just let it burn.

I'm so much better now, than I was back then.
Theres someone out there...
Someone who'll love me, not pretend.
I'll find true love,
And I won't cry for you again.

What you pushed away, another will hold.
You saw me as trash, but really, Im gold.

Someitmes I still cry.

Everywhere I look.
Everywhere I turn.
The pain can't be shook.
I just let it burn.
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Old Jun 18, 2008, 09:06 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Sometimes I Still Cry

Thats very good i love the way you make come alive and just smack the reader in the face...but there have been quite a few of these latly and its not to original but on a skale of 1-10 i give you an 8
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Thats very good i love the way you make come alive and just smack the reader in the face...but there have been quite a few of these latly and its not to original but on a skale of 1-10 i give you an 8
I suppose I should do a bit more studying of whats already in the forum before I post?
But... then again, I would imagine... anything about love, or a lover scorned. Is not going to be original. I will make sure I stay away from this topic next time.
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