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    Song of Sadness

    Deep within,
    A world,
    Where...
    Your heart lays.

    You can hear,
    The childrens voices.
    Lost within,
    A dark green wood.

    Above,
    The night sky.
    There is an angel,
    That sings.

    Her voice,
    So beautiful.
    Only I...
    Could hear.

    But her song...
    Is of sadness.
    For she is in a world,
    She cannot escape.

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    Re: Song of Sadness

    To me is seems as though an angels heart is lamenting the death of children. I myself use the image of the angel of mercy more than once in my poems. Well done.

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    Re: Song of Sadness

    I got a feeling that this poem somewhat really connects me into it...
    Though I did really like this...
    It somehows really a point of view that makes me think what it is..
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: Song of Sadness

    You almost made me cry... Ok, you did make me cry. Stop that! ;_; Jk. And for idk... The 100th time; thank you.

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    Re: Song of Sadness

    That was a sad poem AngelOfDarkness21 but a good sad poem.
    Keep making more poems

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