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    Song of Spring

    The thaw is here, which
    means that spring is near.
    No more winter jackets,
    no more frost biting my ear.

    Soon the snow will melt,
    shortly after, grass will rise.
    The sunlight on the colored
    flowers stimulates my eyes.

    I can't wait to feel that
    warm breeze as it filters
    through the trees and
    brings old man winter
    down to his frigid knees.

    No, I can't wait...
    Let's get out of this cooler!
    I wish the groundhog could've
    seen his shadow sooner!

    It's getting warmer out every day.
    Soon we'll all be able to go out and play.
    The birds have returned, listen to them sing.
    Do you recognize that tune? It's 'The Song of Spring'.


    **I wrote this on the fly, I haven't written anything in an while and needed to just push myself in to it. Sorry if this poem bites.**


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    Re: Song of Spring

    Yeah i miss spring, good poem Sprout it really brings out all the memories ^^ amazing rythm and flow nice going, hope to see some more

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    Re: Song of Spring

    BOO!

    Naw I'm playin'.

    But haven't you ever heard of March being the snowiest month in Minnesota?
    Well, just keep singin' your song homie. I would too, If I had to catch the bus.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Song of Spring

    Excellent. Hard to believe someone could throw this together. Remarkable pace and rhyme.

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    Re: Song of Spring

    Thanks to all who commented on this. I haven't written in a while, so I didn't know if 'Song of Spring' would be any good. I still think that my previous works I've posted here were a bit better, but if I didn't write somethin', I'd continue to be rusty.

    Now, I'm rambling. Anyway, I'm workin' on more new stuff and I actually found an old notebook of mine, so I may (or may not) post the archive poetry. Arigato! Ja ne!


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    Re: Song of Spring

    You think you're getting rusty? My gears have fallen to pieces and rusted to dust xD

    This is very good actually.. very slow as to show the "nostalgic" effect.. felt like im there watching the grass grow instantly as the snow melts... a wind blown in and turn the wheels of change called nature.. i love it... very soothing effect in this poem... ^^
    too bad im having a cold.. can't enjoy it fully.. >.<

    Keep it up man

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    Re: Song of Spring

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    You think you're getting rusty? My gears have fallen to pieces and rusted to dust xD

    This is very good actually.. very slow as to show the "nostalgic" effect.. felt like im there watching the grass grow instantly as the snow melts... a wind blown in and turn the wheels of change called nature.. i love it... very soothing effect in this poem... ^^
    too bad im having a cold.. can't enjoy it fully.. >.<

    Keep it up man
    Thanks, RayMe! I appreciate your comment (which was very poetic as well, LOL). It sucks to hear you've got a cold when the weather is so kick-ass right now. Get well soon!


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