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    A Sop To Cerberus

    There's something I've been waiting for,
    something to make my voice quit breaking,
    something to stop me from shaking.

    Maybe its the upturn of your smirk, or the softness
    of your lips.

    So, I have been staring through the clouds looking for
    this reason to be.

    My breath is ice to match my skin,
    my hair a black bushel of fire.

    There's something I've been waiting for, something
    to make this pencil move,
    something to make the nights easier, and the days
    shorter.

    So, I'm running down the block, wind slicing my
    hair, this country sidewalk cracking beneath me.

    All these shadowy one story windows are fading off into
    the distance, I can't feel my lungs inflate anymore.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: A Sop To Cerberus

    I like this verse...

    "There's something I've been waiting for, something
    to make this pencil move,
    something to make the nights easier, and the days
    shorter"

    sheesh...reminds me when im in writers block a bit..

    Overall.. this is a good poem ^^ nice indeed.. keep up the good work ^^

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    whooooooosh

    cool poem

    i liked it because I could picture different pictures in my head, I like the way you wrote your verses. keep it up ^_^



    -Zainab

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    Re: A Sop To Cerberus

    Thankies to you both. It didn't take me very long to write this poem therefore I didn't really like it that much...but if everyone else does then yay!
    Dear Dinah...

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