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    sorrow

    mind the spelling and grammer please. ive heard it all before

    sorrow

    this pain fills my heart again, i cant explain why i feel this way.
    i cry and hurt, and feel sorrow all day long.
    im happy on the outside, but im dying on the inside.
    so many things have been happening to me, i dont think i can fight this way
    my heart has been broken while its being meadded.
    my emotions split with the reality of my life.

    the sorrow i feel is due to the inside workings of a broken heart.
    im so blue but i move on with the sorrow.
    im still holding on, wishing on every star that passes....
    my life holds no meaning to others other then one.
    im wandering now in this day and age, faceing all the fears that i cant cage.
    but as i turn the page, i can see the end of the race.
    this pace has been to fast but now im in last place.

    this time the sorrow has corrupted me, beyond all repairs, im so ensnared.
    it hurts when you call me and tell me you care, but i can bare to not hear what you have to say.
    ill never give in though i had my chance and im left in the waste of something that could have been.....
    the sorrow has got me down, but ill try and fight for a new life.
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
    http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
    this is my site come and see me there sometime!

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    Re: sorrow

    Hmm.. another nice poem.. sad though but it's good ^^
    u never cease to amaze me.. keep up the good work...

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    Re: sorrow

    thanks freind...... its all true feelings of a broken man.....
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
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    Re: sorrow

    "this time the sorrow has corrupted me, beyond all repairs, im so ensnared."

    This verse made the poem from me. I only wish that certain rules would have been applied to the poem.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: sorrow

    i know i know..... im trying to fix my issues with my punc and grammar and spelling but im not going to be able to change on a fly.. so give me some time.
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
    http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
    this is my site come and see me there sometime!

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