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Sorrow
>Some things should have been left unsaid
>Some hurts goes to deep
> The sorrow, the guilt, and the hatred
> stick to you and seep
> you wish you could erase time
> due to the guilt that never leaves
> I can't even think of a word to describe this rhyme
> the pain and everlasting sadness
hmmmm sooooo tell me about it how is it xD
> around my body they bend
> only one thing is certain,
> this poem has come to an end
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Re: Sorrow
Hhhm.......the style is this one seems unclear to me.....I am not saying it is bad....just a little bit confusing
I do not think that the words reflect the title........
But still it was very nice
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Re: Sorrow
....another failer:( im no good at this why do i even try =[ thanks for yoru comment