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    Sorrow

    >Some things should have been left unsaid

    >Some hurts goes to deep

    > The sorrow, the guilt, and the hatred

    > stick to you and seep

    > you wish you could erase time

    > due to the guilt that never leaves

    > I can't even think of a word to describe this rhyme

    > the pain and everlasting sadness

    hmmmm sooooo tell me about it how is it xD
    > around my body they bend

    > only one thing is certain,

    > this poem has come to an end
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    Re: Sorrow

    Hhhm.......the style is this one seems unclear to me.....I am not saying it is bad....just a little bit confusing
    I do not think that the words reflect the title........
    But still it was very nice
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    Re: Sorrow

    ....another failer im no good at this why do i even try =[ thanks for yoru comment
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