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May 08, 2006, 04:46 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Castel of awakening Dreams
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 Credits: 210 | Sorrowful angel Maybe it’s the dark That continues to try to Seep into light that has Dwindled into nothingness. Maybe it’s the crying flower Of happiness. Maybe it’s my heart which Is constantly changing Shades. Or maybe just maybe its me. My face says I’m happy while my Heart says otherwise. This feeling is the feeling of sorrowful Angels of my eternity that cry.. Why am I tortured by myself? While the blood of eternity seeps into Darkness. Please help for i know much but not the answer to Myself.
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May 08, 2006, 05:42 AM
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Credits: 1,071 | Re: Sorrowful angel Wow this is really good man, keep it up!
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May 08, 2006, 02:18 PM
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Credits: 280 | Re: Sorrowful angel I like this poem... it 's good in it's own way and it quite got to me so... I like it very much, mostly the conclusion to the poem!
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May 08, 2006, 03:40 PM
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Credits: 1,275 | Re: Sorrowful angel hmmm i like it bud!^^ u are a good wirter u should write more. well keep it up and i post when u make more^^
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May 08, 2006, 07:51 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I live in a Place where I'am Truly Happy and that would be with All My Friends
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Credits: 458 | Re: Sorrowful angel hmmm I thought that was pretty Intresting keep it up 
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May 09, 2006, 04:37 AM
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Credits: 210 | Re: Sorrowful angel thank you ,thank you, thank you all ^_^ and for your support i will continue to put them on here.. BTW i get it from ma momma
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May 09, 2006, 04:42 AM
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Credits: 901 | Re: Sorrowful angel Nice..... I sense the sorrowness into myself...... I think you meant to say in this line is sorrowness instead of sorrowful..... EDIT: This feeling is the feeling of sorrowful(sorrowness) Don't worry its fine with me..... Hope I see some of your works.....
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May 09, 2006, 05:02 AM
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Credits: 210 | Re: Sorrowful angel sorrowness angel? thanks for the reply though......
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May 15, 2006, 05:15 AM
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Credits: 1,071 | Re: Sorrowful angel Like I said this is a great poem and u should continue writing. This poem is written with a sad mood but it is still good.
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May 15, 2006, 06:12 AM
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Credits: 110 | Re: Sorrowful angel awesome poem Sage_Se'von it is a sad one and it is great sad poems always where at the top of my *like* list
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