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    Sorrowful angel

    Maybe it’s the dark
    That continues to try to
    Seep into light that has
    Dwindled into nothingness.

    Maybe it’s the crying flower
    Of happiness.

    Maybe it’s my heart which
    Is constantly changing
    Shades.

    Or maybe just maybe its me.

    My face says I’m happy while my
    Heart says otherwise.
    This feeling is the feeling of sorrowful
    Angels of my eternity that cry..
    Why am I tortured by myself?
    While the blood of eternity seeps into
    Darkness.

    Please help for i know much but not the answer to
    Myself.

    I am a sage....the light of elements

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    Re: Sorrowful angel

    Wow this is really good man, keep it up!

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    Re: Sorrowful angel

    I like this poem... it 's good in it's own way and it quite got to me so... I like it very much, mostly the conclusion to the poem!
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    Re: Sorrowful angel

    hmmm i like it bud!^^ u are a good wirter u should write more. well keep it up and i post when u make more^^
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    Re: Sorrowful angel

    hmmm

    I thought that was pretty Intresting keep it up

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    Re: Sorrowful angel

    thank you ,thank you, thank you all ^_^ and for your support i will continue to put them on here..




    BTW i get it from ma momma

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    Re: Sorrowful angel

    Nice..... I sense the sorrowness into myself......

    I think you meant to say in this line is sorrowness instead of sorrowful.....

    EDIT:
    This feeling is the feeling of sorrowful(sorrowness)

    Don't worry its fine with me..... Hope I see some of your works.....

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    Re: Sorrowful angel

    sorrowness angel? thanks for the reply though......

    I am a sage....the light of elements

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