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    Sorry

    I am sorry for what i did to you
    Leana I am sorry too
    I made many mistakes in my life and its hurting me cant you see
    Please fogive me god and take the pain off of me
    Sorry to every one I betrayed and lied to
    Its my fault and no one elses and the problems I caused,I had no clue
    To everyone I'll sat am sorry today
    I am not leaving no way

    -This a sample of my poetry
    Lone W

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    Sweeeeeeet.... Though, I did recognize some spelling and a few grammatical errors. I recommend you to go over your work. But it's still good, nonetheless!

    mmhmm.

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    Re: Sorry

    Very sweet poem. I think if everyone was apoologized to like that forgiveness would come easier. Great job
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    Re: Sorry

    It's for"Leana"? oh boy.
    It would have been better if it were a bit longer. ^_^ But that doesn't mean I don't love it. You made your point clear ^_^

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    Re: Sorry

    For fefer to somebody in this poem is a brave choice.Mostly,people have dedicated their poems to someone they care for but not actually mentioning his/her name in the poem itself,or at least in the poems that i have read already.THis is quite good.

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    Re: Sorry

    Thanks everyone i hurt he feelings badly,and i am 3 time publish poet and she did forgive me
    Lone W

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    Re: Sorry

    I like it alot. There were spelling mistakes. twords the end. But it was good other wise and it was sweet.Hope to see more of your work.(^.^)

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