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Apr 18, 2007, 10:12 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Terabithia
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 Credits: 273 | Sorry Sorry I'm not perfect Sorry I'm not so smart Sorry I couldn't be there Sorry we're always apart I know its my fault Forgive me please When the summer breeze hits my cheeks Sorry it doesn't hit the trees Sorry I'm so busy Sorry I haven't got a clue Sorry when I say this Sorry I need you -sarah
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Apr 19, 2007, 01:04 AM
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 Heavy Metal Goddess  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun
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Credits: 2,336 | Re: Sorry Nice poem and nice appology if you ever need one lol.
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Apr 19, 2007, 01:08 AM
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Credits: 14,832 | Re: Sorry Yeah yeah you're forgiven.~ Lol JK ^_^ Nice poem, very short though... not many emotions which suits your apology theme 
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Apr 19, 2007, 04:31 AM
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| Otaku  | Re: Sorry i love it ..nice pome ..  I’m sorry, I’m sorry for all the times I’ve cried I’m sorry for every single lie I’m sorry I was never enough I’m sorry I just wasn’t tough Sorry I couldn’t make you smile Sorry I didn’t make you stay a while Sorry it was nothing more than sex I’m sorry I have to call you my ex I’m sorry you broke my heart I’m sorry I tore you apart I’m sorry we can’t get along I’m sorry, I cry to every song I’m sorry I hide when you come around Sorry I hang my head, eyes always on the ground Sorry we couldn’t make it Sorry I just couldn’t take it Sorry we never meant much Sorry you LOVED to touch, Sorry you couldn’t see past my looks I’m sorry for every part of me you took I’m sorry for all the pain you’ve caused I’m sorry I let you in at all, I’m sorry I pushed you away I’m sorry you don’t deserve me in any way I’m sorry we will never again meet I’m sorry this as far as we will see, Never past the words I’m sorry to the broken trust Now all I see is the way you lust I’m sorry we just weren’t meant to be And I’m sorry you feel you never hurt me What I’m sorry for most of all, Is how I’m just say sorry, I haven’t been sorry at all.
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Apr 19, 2007, 03:41 PM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Credits: 13,226 | Re: Sorry What a good nice poem. It was very nice so keep up the good work. 
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Apr 19, 2007, 09:08 PM
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| Why so serious? | Re: Sorry I have to agree with rave. Not many emotions were shown in this poem. It is as if it were written by a robot. Recitation.. nothing more. It is a short, wonderful poem, don't get me wrong. It just would have made more sense if you added feeling and detail to it. What you thought about all of the things you were sorry for. ^_^ |
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Apr 19, 2007, 09:54 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Terabithia
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Credits: 273 | Re: Sorry this poem was meant for my boyfriend, and so it was sorta to myself at the time. I decided to post it up anyway. I never intended to do anything with it.
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