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    Sorry

    Sorry I'm not perfect
    Sorry I'm not so smart

    Sorry I couldn't be there
    Sorry we're always apart

    I know its my fault
    Forgive me please
    When the summer breeze hits my cheeks
    Sorry it doesn't hit the trees

    Sorry I'm so busy
    Sorry I haven't got a clue
    Sorry when I say this
    Sorry I need you

    -sarah

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    Re: Sorry

    Nice poem and nice appology if you ever need one lol.
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    Re: Sorry

    Yeah yeah you're forgiven.~

    Lol JK ^_^

    Nice poem, very short though... not many emotions which suits your apology theme

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    Re: Sorry

    i love it ..nice pome ..
    I’m sorry,
    I’m sorry for all the times I’ve cried
    I’m sorry for every single lie
    I’m sorry I was never enough
    I’m sorry I just wasn’t tough
    Sorry I couldn’t make you smile
    Sorry I didn’t make you stay a while
    Sorry it was nothing more than sex
    I’m sorry I have to call you my ex
    I’m sorry you broke my heart
    I’m sorry I tore you apart
    I’m sorry we can’t get along
    I’m sorry, I cry to every song
    I’m sorry I hide when you come around
    Sorry I hang my head, eyes always on the ground
    Sorry we couldn’t make it
    Sorry I just couldn’t take it
    Sorry we never meant much
    Sorry you LOVED to touch,
    Sorry you couldn’t see past my looks
    I’m sorry for every part of me you took
    I’m sorry for all the pain you’ve caused
    I’m sorry I let you in at all,
    I’m sorry I pushed you away
    I’m sorry you don’t deserve me in any way
    I’m sorry we will never again meet
    I’m sorry this as far as we will see,
    Never past the words I’m sorry to the broken trust
    Now all I see is the way you lust
    I’m sorry we just weren’t meant to be
    And I’m sorry you feel you never hurt me
    What I’m sorry for most of all,
    Is how I’m just say sorry, I haven’t been sorry at all.

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Sorry

    What a good nice poem. It was very nice so keep up the good work.
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    Re: Sorry

    I have to agree with rave. Not many emotions were shown in this poem. It is as if it were written by a robot. Recitation.. nothing more. It is a short, wonderful poem, don't get me wrong. It just would have made more sense if you added feeling and detail to it. What you thought about all of the things you were sorry for. ^_^

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    Re: Sorry

    this poem was meant for my boyfriend, and so it was sorta to myself at the time. I decided to post it up anyway.
    I never intended to do anything with it.

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