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Reply With Quotewow raja!!! very sweet and nice. same thng happened to me. but i was in 4th grade so i dont thnk that counts
this poem i made is inspired by my experience... choosing between friendship and love... hmm.. feel free to post comments^^
Sorry, I love you
We’ve been friends since childhood,
Until the time we came to adulthood,
We’ve been together since times of play,
Until the time came to us for serious play.
We’ve been supporting each other
In everything we opted to do,
We’ve been shoulders to cry on,
When life seemed to be cruel.
We’ve known each other’s secrets,
Keeping them with no regrets,
Until the time came on me,
Intimate feelings for you I hid.
Everytime we’ve been together,
My heart seemed to pound so strong,
Everytime we are apart from each other,
My heart seemed to grow fonder.
Now I’m in front of you,
My flame of courage starts burning,
Not knowing how to say the words
I’ve been longing to say.
“Sorry, I love you”
Is what I want to say,
Will this end our friendship,
Or this will start an intimate relationship?
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
wow raja!!! very sweet and nice. same thng happened to me. but i was in 4th grade so i dont thnk that counts
Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen
Thanks Princesslady for your comment on this poem of mine. i just poured out my feelings in there.^^
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
This poem is nice......
This is really inspiring.....
'Touka Koukan'
hito wa nanika no gisei nashi ni, nani mo eru koto wa dekinai.
nanika wo eru tame ni wa, doutou no daika ga hitsuyou ni naru.
sore ga, renkinjutsu ni okeru "toukakoukan" no gensoku da.
sono koro, bokura wa sore ga sekai no shinjitsu da to shinjiteita.
Such a wonderful poem raja_psyche! Great job again psyche...^_^ keep it up!
very awesome insight on another way love can affect people
this kind of love can make or break a freindship,sometimes for the worst
but when it does work something awesome happens ,i really like how you
posted this i can relate in a way and sort of think most great loves come from being freinds but not always. but an awesome poem raja i loved it
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
^^ thanks again pride_edward for posting your comments.
@Chris: i'm glad you liked my poem ^^. yes love can either make or destroy a friendship... so, it is hard to choose between love and friendship. thanks for posting your comments.
@Angevil: thanks also for posting your comment. ^^
Last edited by raja_psyche; Sep 16, 2006 at 11:54 PM.
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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