awwww lol the poem kinda reminded me of one of Shakespeare's plays the way its written but it was really beautiful =]
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My own soul was sundered by my own vanity...
Letting thy self imprisoned in choking distress
I did ask for this....
Thy torment,Thy distress bestowed upon me
A...sadness began to swallow my entirety
But...
I will seek thy light to cure this incurable sadness
Aimlessly searching for it...
A lit of thy bliss showed my path to the light
Steadly fast,there I...walked!
I walked out in thy cold distress of my whole entirety...
Hoping to cure my incurable sadness...
Transcending time...
As I walk to the light,A blurry image slowly appeared in thy light
As I became nearer to thy light...
I was astounded of what I see in thy light!...It was the angel of light!
The angel of light...
She was the one who will bestowed purity again to my lost soul to divine sanction of pure omniscience!
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Angel of Light-again my faithful girl friend!
I was originally to make a second one of my first poem(the day after)
but in a sense I didn't make my mind and when I try to do that..I completely losing my mind!
Oh yeah!,this poem is a tribute for our coming 1 year anniversary!(Ok it was september 3!) and I'm soo excited about it!
anyways if you want to congratulate me do it as you like so! or at least a.....
DAMN! comment!
Last edited by receiverofhell; Sep 02, 2009 at 02:59 AM. Reason: a special one
I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
I loved my GF...
awwww lol the poem kinda reminded me of one of Shakespeare's plays the way its written but it was really beautiful =]
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I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the GreatestThank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
receiverofhell (Sep 03, 2009)
OH really? blackrose?awwww lol the poem kinda reminded me of one of Shakespeare's plays the way its written but it was really beautiful =]
Well I just did was express my imagination and of course a little part of my life as a student and a lover!(who's heart is such really a dumb pne for me^^)![]()
I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
I loved my GF...
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