Soul Stream

shadowrulz · Aug 24, 2007, 04:02 PM

As the flowing river flows
And the blowing wind blows
And the running wolf runs
And the stunning woman stuns

The world is still on the stream
That lonely stream
The one called Destiny
The only Destiny

The great cat roars
And the great eagle soars
And the trees all sway
And the dirt turns to clay

The world is still on the stream
The ever-steady stream
The one called Destiny
The perfect Destiny

It is the Stream of Souls
The Soul Stream
It decides your Fate of Ending
Your Ending Fate

*Peach_follows* · Aug 24, 2007, 04:30 PM

Wow, I loved the wording here. Such an astounding rythm. It sang to me... like music.

!Jamie5192 · Aug 24, 2007, 05:29 PM

It is a very good poem and i love the way it's written. It's a wonderful poem that reminds me of a game i love to play.. keep up the good work^^

iluvmyloser · Aug 24, 2007, 06:03 PM

good poem very well written and describes very powerfull wording i love it!!!keep it ↑

♥~*The Princess*~♥

Little negi sensei · Aug 25, 2007, 06:37 AM

Very good.Great wording and word choice.Keep writing...................or else..........

Aug 24, 2007, 04:02 PM	#1 (permalink)
shadowrulz Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: the sign says "in a black hole". Is that even possible?!?! Posts: 371 Thanks: 4 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 6,560	Soul Stream As the flowing river flows And the blowing wind blows And the running wolf runs And the stunning woman stuns The world is still on the stream That lonely stream The one called Destiny The only Destiny The great cat roars And the great eagle soars And the trees all sway And the dirt turns to clay The world is still on the stream The ever-steady stream The one called Destiny The perfect Destiny It is the Stream of Souls The Soul Stream It decides your Fate of Ending Your Ending Fate __________________ CLICK GOODBYE A.O.
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Aug 24, 2007, 04:30 PM	#2 (permalink)
Peach_follows Femmebot's feel nothing. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley Posts: 1,026 Thanks: 42 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 2,204	Re: Soul Stream Wow, I loved the wording here. Such an astounding rythm. It sang to me... like music. __________________ Who needs a spray can, when you're a femmebot? http://www.myspace.com/j1gg481tt
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Aug 24, 2007, 05:29 PM	#3 (permalink)
!Jamie5192 Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 377 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -184	Re: Soul Stream It is a very good poem and i love the way it's written. It's a wonderful poem that reminds me of a game i love to play.. keep up the good work^^
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Aug 24, 2007, 06:03 PM	#4 (permalink)
iluvmyloser Àddïctëd tø \|ăüghïñg :) Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ♥>>WHERE y0U WANNA bE??<<♥ Posts: 653 Thanks: 26 Thanked 15 Times in 14 Posts Credits: 10,547	Re: Soul Stream good poem very well written and describes very powerfull wording i love it!!!keep it ↑ ♥~The Princess~♥ __________________ ♥~Thanks Eve for this on my Bday!Bow down to your royal highness~♥ Join Animal Wonders.. <-- Click it!!!^^
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Aug 25, 2007, 06:37 AM	#5 (permalink)
Little negi sensei Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 359 Thanks: 13 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 1,076	Re: Soul Stream Very good.Great wording and word choice.Keep writing...................or else.......... __________________
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