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    Soul Stream

    As the flowing river flows
    And the blowing wind blows
    And the running wolf runs
    And the stunning woman stuns

    The world is still on the stream
    That lonely stream
    The one called Destiny
    The only Destiny

    The great cat roars
    And the great eagle soars
    And the trees all sway
    And the dirt turns to clay

    The world is still on the stream
    The ever-steady stream
    The one called Destiny
    The perfect Destiny

    It is the Stream of Souls
    The Soul Stream
    It decides your Fate of Ending
    Your Ending Fate

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    Re: Soul Stream

    Wow, I loved the wording here. Such an astounding rythm. It sang to me... like music.
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    Re: Soul Stream

    It is a very good poem and i love the way it's written. It's a wonderful poem that reminds me of a game i love to play.. keep up the good work^^

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    Re: Soul Stream

    good poem very well written and describes very powerfull wording i love it!!!keep it ↑
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    Re: Soul Stream

    Very good.Great wording and word choice.Keep writing...................or else..........

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