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    The souls salvation

    A warm light,
    leading me to salvation,
    That light is your love.
    A soft touch,
    soothing my soul,
    this toch is your kiss.
    My love for you,
    strong and unconditional,
    will always be here.
    My life,
    devoted to one,
    belongs to you.

    When it's all over, will you make me your's?

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    Re: The souls salvation

    awwww this poem is really sweet. a few spelling errors but thats ok lol^^ i liked reading it but it was really short you need to add more details to make it longer but the flow and message is on point just the length and the details. good job
    cant wait to hear more
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