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    The Sound Of Thunder!

    The blade so sleek and stainless
    it glimmers as the sun hits the
    blades smooth reflective surface,
    a sigh can be heard as the blade i
    is held steady and non moving.

    A thunder arises from over the mound
    lush with greenery as banners flapping
    in the wind rise and aproach the now waiting
    blade , a smile cracks on the face of the one
    who holds the blade gripping the sword tightly
    he gives a stare that would kill a thousand men.

    As the heads now come over the mound the thunder
    gets closer as he stands his ground not giving one
    quarter to those who would dare take it , the thunder now
    becoming more silent the dust settles as the wind carries
    it away slowly revealing those who came to fight and to

    Nothing can prepare the young boys now made men
    for the moment of fate when 2 brothers who once
    were joined are now severed for all time , i blow
    on a horn echoes in the Vally as roars can be heard
    his blade now focused he is ready to face what must

    The thunder roars deafening all as metal meets metal
    and blood is shed his blade now full of desire for death
    he slays those who come before him as the battle seems
    to always find someone who will offer there life for him to
    live another day , the sun sets the thunder dead for a
    moment , he takes his blade and cares for it cleaning all
    the blood his blade has tasted preparing for a new day to

    As he sits there he is reminded of a saying and he murmurs
    these words like a prayer * Blood drawn from hate is better
    drawn from a blade than that blood which is drawn from love*
    he then rests his head thinking on how to better his self for tomorrow
    could be his last day to live.

    this is a poem about fighting a battle that seems to engulf
    everyone and the only luxury is when the sun goes down and
    there is a few hours rest. comment and sugestions are welcomed
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Sound Of Thunder!

    Great poem it had me spellbound from beginning to end. It sounded like some kind of ancient rome movie where people dressed up in amour and faught with nothing but swords. It was a very interesting story. Keep up the good work.
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