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    Talking Sounds of Genius

    I liked the other poems a lot, so i made one of my own, there were far too many busted, broken, burnt, scabbed, scarred, cracked, so i just made a thinker for everyone

    there are sounds of genius,
    a sound that can be both felt and heard,
    they travel through our souls and map them,
    I am as still as a statue, that sits in the sun
    If i'm the statue under the sun, then why are you the one casting the shadow?


    panicking to solve a riddle, I hear them,
    they are shouting to us...always,
    tnside our music and out, i feel them,There is a reflex that is motionless,
    the sounds are calling once more,
    slowly chanting, where are they?


    I cannot see them,
    what has become of this statue?
    a dark sky stares at me, a storm brews,
    thunder crashes to the ground,
    the sound is genius, I am that dark sky,
    if the sun is casted out by the storm,
    there is no shadow, just the sounds and me,
    if I am the sky, am I the one making those sounds i search for?

    You bet I am, those sounds...I make them,
    they study me, mapping me as i study them,
    the storm clears, if the dark sky was staring at me does that me I was staring at my self? You bet it does. Still as a statue, furious as a storm.
    I have found these sounds, I make them, i am a sound of genius myself

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    Re: Sounds of Genius

    Nice. Pretty descriptive and dramatic.
    It's been a while since I did poetry.

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    Re: Sounds of Genius

    oh thanks ^__^ i came up with that one just being sick and layout still watching it rain LOL

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    Re: Sounds of Genius

    Whaa...it's amazing! ^_^ Great job! You're a freaking genius!

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